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Watch the re-write, and check out the before and after emails below!
Breaking Up the Right Way
Break Up 1: Bye For Now
Hey Will,
I reached out a few times. I’m going to chalk it up to my timing being off.
Given the recent hype around GPT – I wanted to highlight your voice on the topic. Our audience is about 10k and growing.
Feel free to correct me, if I’ve got it wrong. I’ll stop my outreach for now.
Break Up 2: The Referral
Hey Will,
Would your co-founder, William, be a better person to talk to about this?
I see your name on LinkedIn a bunch, but I also realize William might want to be lead voice on this topic as CEO.
Excited to highlight your team, and the hype building in this space.
Bonus Play
Hey William,
Did Will forward you my note? I’m writing a piece on the hype related to GPT.
I thought your team’s voice would be important to highlight.
Is this more a thing for him or you?
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