In this episode of Pardon the Outbound, Lavender co-founder Will Allred and guest Nate Nasralla (founder of Fluint.io and award-winning Sales Hacker writer) take on a real cold email sent to Will.

You’ll see this hiring email torn down and built back up in under 14 minutes — plus, learn factoids like, “Did you know 2-word subject lines get the most replies?”

(It’s true.)

See how Will and Nate each rewrite this cold email.

Watch it here